Essay 13

Essay 12- not just first body.

         

Television

An Essay on Friendship

By: Jake DeLapp

Pine Point School

Eighth Grade A English

          In many ways I am a TV who has lots of remotes. My remotes are what guides and helps me along life. They help me when times are tough or if I need some adjusting. I feel, that in many ways, companionship can be compared to a TV and remotes.

          In many ways friendship is more than friendship itself. It can be compared to so many different things and explained a variety of different ways. I think that companionship is a lot like a TV and a remote because, for one, a television and a remote go together perfectly. If you look at an actual TV and an actual remote you notice that TV’s always have, or come, with remotes. I think that I could compare myself to the TV because I am incondite without my remote, the device that guides me, helps me choose which way to go, giving me hope in the hardest times. I also think that TV’s and remotes are a lot like companionship because the remote guides the TV. In real life the remote is whets telling the TV to change channels, go down a different path or even shut down. This is like friendship because if you are the TV and the remote is your friend, your friends, or remotes, are always bolstering you out in life and making sure you head down the right path. Finally there’s the fact that a TV would be nothing without a remote. If you had a TV without a remote you wouldn’t be able to change channels and you might be watching the food network all day long. In friendship if you’re the TV that’s lost its remote or friend you suddenly find it a lot harder to do accustomed things without your remote and it’s certainly not as enjoyable. If I look at companionship I can always see a lot more
than just a bond itself.
         
          TV’s and remotes are literally meant for each other, whereas my friends and I are made for each other. My friends always help me out and make my life better. My mates also help me out when times are hard and I need to talk to someone or have someone to talk to. Friendship is basica

outline-first body of essay 13

TS: Love can be good and bad: need to work for
        SD: Love just happening-doesn’t make sense
                CM1. Crooks don’t go to crops
                CM2 Why love someone you barely know
        SD. True love takes lots of work
                CM1. Like a school project-bad without effort
                CM2. Life requires work, so does love
CS. If you want love work for it

Essay 13

Working for love

An Essay on Finding True Love

By: Jake DeLapp

Pine Point School 8A English

April, 2011

          Love can be great, but at other time it can just plain suck. I feel that love is something that you need to work for. People who think love is going to sneak up on them and bite them in the butt, I feel, won’t find this to be the truth as they progress in life. I don’t think that you just fall in love because it‘s like having the police think that whenever someone breaks the law the crook will just show up at the door of the police station and tell the cops what they did, it doesn’t make any sense at all. How can you love someone and want to spend lots of time, or even your entire life with them if you don’t even know them that well, it‘s like wanting to marry the creepy old guy that lives down the street. If you wan to find love I think it’s something a lot like a school project, if you want it to be good you have to put a lot of time and effort in or, in the end, it wont work very well. As in almost everything in life, if you want to be successful you must work hard instead of sitting back and watching other people live their lives, and love is no exception. My opinion is that if you want true love then you have to work for it, it doesn’t just happen.

essay 12 outline

TS; Lots of things you can compare to friendship (TV and remote)
        SD: Friendship is like TV and remote because they go together perfectly
                    CM1: TV’s are always with remotes
                    CM2: Friends are always with friends
        SD: Remotes guide TV’s
                    CM1: tell TV what channels etc.
                    CM2: Friends help guide you, like TV and remote
        SD: TV is nothing without remote, vice versa
                    CM1: Can’t do anything without remote
                    CM2: Without your friend life is hard/unenjoyable
CS: Lots of different things compare to friendship

Essay 12

Televison and Friendship

An Essay on Friendship

Pine Point Eigth Grade English

April 2011

By: Jake DeLapp



        In many ways friendship is more than friendship itself, it can be compared to so many different things and explained so many different ways. I think that companionship is a lot like a TV and a remote because, for one, a television and a remote go together perfectly. If you look at an actual TV and an actual remote you notice that TV’s always have or come with remotes. I think that I could compare myself to the TV because I am incondite without my remote. I also think that TV’s and remotes are a lot like companionship because the remote guides the TV. In real life the remote is whets telling the TV to change channels or go down a different path and even shut down. This is like friendship because you are the TV and the remote is your friend, your friends or remotes are always bolstering you out in life and making sure you head down the right path. Finally there’s the fact that a TV would be nothing without a remote. If you had a TV without a remote you wouldn’t be able to change channels and you might be watching the food network all day long. In friendship if you’re the TV that’s lost its remote or friend you suddenly find it a lot harder to do accustomed things without your remote and it’s certainly not as enjoyable. If I look at companionship I can always see a lot more than just a bond itself.