graphic organizer-growing up essay

Main Point or Thesis of Essay = as you grow up you change in many ways
Bell word = change

Paragraph 1 -- Opening
Hook = adults never the same as when they were 3
Comment on the hook = Change mentally
Comment on the hook = change physically
Thesis (with bell word) = as you grow up you morph
Paragraph 2
TS (Main Idea, Topic, or Thesis) = In TKAM jem start to change
2 Echo words to be used = transformation, modification
SD = grows up mentally
CM = doesn’t play childish games
CM = spends more time alone
SD = not a boy anymore
CM = child in start of book, progressed as book comes along
CM = becoming his own person
CS = not the character we used to know

Paragraph 3
TS (Main Idea, Topic, or Thesis) = I’m also growing up
2 Echo words to be used = alteration, ammendment
SD = not childish anymore
CM = don’t play games
CM = much smarter and more serious
SD = not the same physically
CM = much taller and stronger
CM = do stuff never could before
CS = everyone changes
Paragraph 4
Hook (the same as paragraph 1, or different) = nobody stays the same
Echo word (could be bell word) = adjustment
Comment on the hook = change mentally
Comment on the hook = change physically
Re-statement, in slightly different words, of the thesis = as you grow up you change in many ways