Thesis=moms a hero
Bell word=Surprising
Hook=Mom saved dads life once
Cm1=waterfalls
Cm2=mom grabbed dad before he fell
Topic/hook=moms a hero
2 echo words=amazing, shocking
Sd=had no idea any of this happened
Cm1=why didn’t my parents tell me
Cm2=mom doesn’t do cool stuff anymore
Concluding sentence=
Topic/hook=why don’t I have fun anymore
2 echo words=awakening, astounding
Sd=parents went on awesome vacations before me
Cm1=why don’t we do awesome stuff anymore
Cm2=I want to slide down waterfalls
Concluding sentence=get parents to take me to fun vacations
Echo word=stunning
Hook=mom is cooler than I thought
Cm1=saved dads life
Cm2=did cool stuff
Restate thesis=moms a hero
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